Blog 3

when I was writing this informal summary, I learned that I am not a writer. It is not fun for me to sit down at a typewriter and create thoughts that are private to me and put them on a piece of paper for others to read.

Blog 5

I wish I would have take the time to carefully read my paper over and over before turning it in.
I saw alot of typos on the paper and grammatical errors that needed to be corrected before turning the paper in.
I also wish that I would have put more thought into the paper and talked more on the topic of obesity. this issue is really a crisis in America. I should have talked about how so many African American women of all ages are battling with obesity in their families.

blog 6

I thought my critical analysis was fair on my opinion of the movie. the director lead you into different scenes that were controversial and confusing. Everyone in the town knew each other business.

Blog 4

"Research paper free write" Topics that interest me the most are teenage pregancy, sextexing, and childhood bullies. I also like reading about illiteracy among the black youth and gang violence. I read about this constantly, and really think that this issue is going to set African Americans back for fifty years. I am a single parent and really do not like this issue. I think single parenting is a big stressor, and their should be more tax credits involved for single parenting families.

Blog 2

I think I already sent a blog on this, but you do not have my blogger address to verify this comment. I love to write, so I am writing another comment anyway. I wish that when I am writing an essay, I can learn how to put my thoughts on paper for another person to understand. I have so emotions toward writing essays. Sometimes I loved to be challenged in putting my critical thoughts on paper. My thought are very personal to me and I believe when I let other people know my innermost thoughts, it would leave me vulnerable. I know this is not true, but I need help in overcoming phobia when creating these kind of essays.